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COMMENT SHEET NUMBER ONE

COMPARISON OF FINAL DRAFT ESSAY ONE AND EVALUATED DRAFT ESSAY ONE

Using the scale below, please rate questions one through five. Place the appropriate letter in the blank provided at the end of each question.
A.  strongly disagree
B.  disagree
C. neither agree nor disagree
D.  agree
E. strongly agree
1.  Because I received only minimal guidance from the instructor concerning the initial submission of essay number one, I struggled with the rough draft of the essay.
D. 
2.  I felt confident about my writing skills when I submitted my final draft of essay one.
C.
3.  When I received my evaluated copy of essay number one, I was satisfied with my score.
A.
4.  After reviewing the evaluated copy of essay number one, I recognized that many of the weaknesses pointed out were in areas with which I am familiar.
D.
5.  I found peer review to be a valuable component of my writing process.                         D.
After comparing your rough draft to the evaluated final draft of essay one, you should be able to gauge the state of your writing skills at the start of the semester. Provide a well-structured paragraph in response to each of the following (two separate paragraphs).
How did the comparison help you to identify your writing strengths?


By comparing my rough draft of essay one to my final draft I was able to see my strengths of getting all my thoughts onto the page. In my first essay I had plenty of complete thoughts and points in the essay. From the rough to the final draft I was able to bring my thoughts and make them structured and get them on the page. 

How did the comparison help you to understand your writing weaknesses?

The weaknesses I had with the first essay was my organization and flow of the essay. From comparing the rough and final draft I was able to tell that even though I had complete thoughts and all my points out in the essay they did not flow well or have organization. I also was able to see my grammatical errors I had and that even from the rough to final draft I had many errors left. 

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